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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Mail correction please?

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Below is an email to my business partner from other company explaining the process of making an ornament. I'd be grateful for any corrections. Thank you.

After discussing it with our sculptor and glassblowers, we would like to mention that because of the technical issues it would be preferable if the tree was made in one piece. That is because it is a lot more difficult to blow the base as a seperate piece. The base is basically flat and when blown a lot of tension accumulates inside it which can easily lead to breakage. This kind of base is also harder to handle when it comes to painting since it does not have a top to hold it. This can considerably slow down the whole process of painting, because painter has to wait until individual piece dries up and only then he can move to painting next parts. As for the tree part - again it itself is very time-consuming in painting. And if one of the parts were to break while glueing them to each other we could do nothing about it. For us it would mean having unnecessary loss of materials and time. We have some experience with making trees, we have made a lot of them until now so we will try and keep fixing the sculpt until we reach the required look.
  

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After discussing it with our sculptor and glassblowers, we think that because of the technical issues it would be preferable if the tree were made in one piece, because it is a lot more difficult to blow the base separately. The base is basically flat, and when blown a lot of tension accumulates inside it, which can easily lead to breakage. This kind of base is also harder to handle when it comes to painting, since it does not have a top to hold it.

  • After discussing it with our sculptor and glassblowers, we think that because of the technical issues it would be preferable if the tree were made in one piece, because it is a lot more difficult to blow the base separately.
  • The base is basically flat, and when blown a lot of tension accumulates inside it, which can easily lead to breakage.
  • This kind of base is also harder to handle when it comes to painting, since it does not have a top to hold it.
  • This can considerably slow down the painting process, because the painter must wait until the individual piece dries; only then can he move on to painting the next parts.
  • As for the tree part: again, it is very time-consuming to paint, and if one of the parts were to break while glueing them together, we could not repair it.
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After discussing it with our sculptor and glassblowers, we think that because of the technical issues it would be preferable if the tree were made in one piece, because it is a lot more difficult to blow the base separately.

The base is basically flat, and when blown a lot of tension accumulates inside it, which can easily lead to breakage. This kind of base is also harder to ha

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