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Kem123 Posted 8 years ago
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Please find the attached revised drafts. kindly approve it by return. Thank you
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kem123 Please find the attached revised draft s . kindly approve it by return. Thank you I think you might want to change something here and try again.
- kem123 Please find the attached revised draft s .
- kindly approve it by return.
- Thank you I think you might want to change something here and try again.
- The parts in red are contradictory.
- CJ
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kem123Please find the attached revised drafts. kindly approve it by return. Thank you
I think you might want to change something here and try again. The parts in red are contradictory.
CJ
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Please find my car keys. I lost them somewhere.
Are your drafts lost? I really dislike that description. It is as if I do not understand email attachments.
Instead, use this:
The revised drafts are attached per your request.
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