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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Maid

I’ve known Janet since High School. I remember the good old days when we would cruise around and drive from Rowland Heights make a cig stop in Alhambra continue on to Temple City and sometimes weave our way to Pasadena. I miss that carefree and nothing to worry about lifestyle, but somehow memories of it makes them even sweeter. I am honored to be your best man and I must say that you’ve done good.

What a wonderful and harmonious occasion we have here. A beautiful bride and her prince charming. I can’t say how happy I am for the both of you. It may be a cliché, but sometimes a match made in heaven does happen on earth and that’s what we’re all gathered here for… To Janet and Devon, let’s all wish them a happy and loving marriage till all eternity.

Please correct for me.

Thanks.
  

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I have underlined some problems: I’ve known Janet since High School . I remember the good old days when we would cruise around and drive from Rowland Heights make a cig stop in Alhambra continue on to Temple City and sometimes weave our way to Pasadena. I miss that carefree and nothing to worry about lifestyle, but somehow memories of it makes them even sweeter.

— Mister Micawber

  • I have underlined some problems: I’ve known Janet since High School .
  • I remember the good old days when we would cruise around and drive from Rowland Heights make a cig stop in Alhambra continue on to Temple City and sometimes weave our way to Pasadena.
  • I miss that carefree and nothing to worry about lifestyle, but somehow memories of it makes them even sweeter.
  • I am honored to be your best man and I must say that you’ve done good .
  • What a wonderful and harmonious occasion we have here.
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I have underlined some problems:

I’ve known Janet since High School. I remember the good old days when we would cruise around and drive from Rowland Heights make a cig stop in Alhambra continue on to Temple City and sometimes weave our way to Pasadena. I miss that carefree and nothing to worry about lifestyle, but somehow memories of it
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Mister MicawberI have underlined some problems:I’ve known Janet since High School. I remember the good old days when we would cruise around and drive from Rowland Heights make a cig stop in Alhambra continue on to Temple City and sometimes weave our way to Pasadena. I miss that carefree and nothing to worry about lifestyle, but somehow memories of it makes them even sweet
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