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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
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Magic mountain

Hey everybody, I think the best and cheapest way would be to get a group of 15 people, but we'll probably have to split up at the park. It's summertime, so it'll be particularly crowded during the weekend, therefore I suggest us getting The Flash Pass Gold or Plat, so we don't end up waiting hours for any ride. I'm going with another group next week and I'll get more information on the group package, ride wait time, discounts, promotions, etc..

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Hey, everybody! I think the best and cheapest way would be to get a group of 15 people, but we'll probably have to split up at the park. It's summertime, so it'll be particularly crowded during the weekend, so I suggest we get a Flash Pass Gold or Plat, so we don't end up waiting hours for the rides .

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  • Hey, everybody!
  • I think the best and cheapest way would be to get a group of 15 people, but we'll probably have to split up at the park.
  • It's summertime, so it'll be particularly crowded during the weekend, so I suggest we get a Flash Pass Gold or Plat, so we don't end up waiting hours for the rides .
  • I'm going with another group next wee k, and I'll get more information on the group package, ride wait time, discounts, promotions, etc .
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Hey, everybody! I think the best and cheapest way would be to get a group of 15 people, but we'll probably have to split up at the park. It's summertime, so it'll be particularly crowded during the weekend, so I suggest we get a Flash Pass Gold or Plat, so we don't end up waiting hours for the rides. I'm going with another group next week, and I'll get more info
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