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Angelnumber222 Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

MA motivation letter

Dear AlpheccaStars,

You've really helped me a great deal with my letter, could I please ask you just to give me your opinion of it overall so I can make final changes and submit it. Thank you!

  

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I tweaked it a little. Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying to your MA Tourism and Culture programme starting in September 2018. In 2011, I earned a Bachelor’s Degree in French Language and Literature from Faculty of Philosophy in X and was honoured to be one of two students in my department who won the “Excellent Bachelor Thesis” award.

  • I tweaked it a little.
  • Dear Sir or Madam, I am applying to your MA Tourism and Culture programme starting in September 2018.
  • In 2011, I earned a Bachelor’s Degree in French Language and Literature from Faculty of Philosophy in X and was honoured to be one of two students in my department who won the “Excellent Bachelor Thesis” award.
  • True respect for both mine and other cultures inspired me to work in tourism and travel industry as well as to spend a part of my career abroad.
  • My work and travel experiences allowed me to use my foreign language skills and thus to connect easily with people from other cultures but also to learn about issues and challenges in their communities.
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I tweaked it a little.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am applying to your MA Tourism and Culture programme starting in September 2018. In 2011, I earned a Bachelor’s Degree in French Language and Literature from Faculty of Philosophy in X and was honoured to be one of two students in my department who won the “Excellent Bachelor Thesis” award. True respect for both mine and other cultures in

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