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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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'm hopeful we can schedule a brief interview in January instead, but if not, I will be sending over some questions.

Are the commas in this sentence in the correct locations?

'm hopeful we can schedule a brief interview in January instead, but if not, I will be sending over some questions.

  

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There are various possibilities here for placing commas. Here are two that I favour. I think that in modern English we try to avoid having a lot of commas.

  • There are various possibilities here for placing commas.
  • Here are two that I favour.
  • I think that in modern English we try to avoid having a lot of commas.
  • eg I'm hopeful we can schedule a brief interview in January instead but, if not, I will be sending over some questions.
  • eg I'm hopeful we can schedule a brief interview in January instead, but if not I will be sending over some questions.
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There are various possibilities here for placing commas. Here are two that I favour.

I think that in modern English we try to avoid having a lot of commas.

eg I'm hopeful we can schedule a brief interview in January instead but, if not, I will be sending over some questions.

eg I'm hopeful we can schedule a brief interview in January instead, but if not I will be se

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anonymous

Are the commas in this sentence in the correct locations?
'm hopeful we can schedule a brief interview in January instead, but if not, I will be sending over some questions.

The parenthetical "if not" does not take its first comma after "but", as you have done.

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