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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
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Can you, please, check the spelling and the choice of words in this paragraph? Thank you.
Then, in 1961, in OKI in Zagreb, a plant for production of polyethylen of low density was built, along with pyrolysis of base petrol of small/low capacity. In 19778, OKI launcehed a new plant for the production of ethylene from base petrol, along with the production of propilene, fractions C4, toulene, benzene, ethylbenzene, kumen, phenol, acetone, stirene, polistirene and polyethylen of low density.
Can you, please, check the spelling and the choice of words in this paragraph? Thank you.
Then, in 1961, in OKI in Zagreb, a plant for production of polyethylen of low density was built, along with pyrolysis of base petrol of small/low capacity. In 19778, OKI launcehed a new plant for the production of ethylene from base petrol, along with the production of propilene, fractions C4, toulene, benzene, ethylbenzene, kumen, phenol, acetone, stirene, polistirene and polyethylen of low density.
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Then, in 1961, in OKI in Zagreb, a small capacity plant for the production of low density polyethylene was built using pyrolysis of base petrol. In 1978, OKI launched a new plant for the production of ethylene from base petrol, and also plants for the production of propylene, C4 fractions, toluene, benzene, ethylbenzene, cumene, phenol, acetone, styrene, polystyrene and low density polyethylene. In the first sentence I have assumed that it was the production plant that was of small capacity - not the base petrol.
- Then, in 1961, in OKI in Zagreb, a small capacity plant for the production of low density polyethylene was built using pyrolysis of base petrol.
- In 1978, OKI launched a new plant for the production of ethylene from base petrol, and also plants for the production of propylene, C4 fractions, toluene, benzene, ethylbenzene, cumene, phenol, acetone, styrene, polystyrene and low density polyethylene.
- In the first sentence I have assumed that it was the production plant that was of small capacity - not the base petrol.
- Also in that sentence I have assumed that the ethylene was produced from a low quality petrol by pyrolysis rather than there being two separate plants, one to produce polyethylene and one to produce base petrol.
- Can you check the original?
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Then, in 1961, in OKI in Zagreb, a small capacity plant for the production of low density polyethylene was built using pyrolysis of base petrol. In 1978, OKI launched a new plant for the production of ethylene from base petrol, and also plants for the production of propylene, C4 fractions, toluene, benzene, ethylbenzene, cumene, phenol, acetone, styrene, polystyrene and low density polyethylene.
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Hello Alan,
I think it is the same plant because the next paragraph describes another plant that was built in 1978. But, the author doesn't explicitly say that polyethylene was made by pyrolysis of base petrol. I will have to ask her what she wanted to say here. She uses with or along with or together with to connect polyethylene and pyrolysis.
I think it is the same plant because the next paragraph describes another plant that was built in 1978. But, the author doesn't explicitly say that polyethylene was made by pyrolysis of base petrol. I will have to ask her what she wanted to say here. She uses with or along with or together with to connect polyethylene and pyrolysis.
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