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Guest Posted 22 years ago

Love Sung

You blue moon ....
Though my smile is a drunken one,
and this bar is dark tonight,
let rhythm embrace your liquid touch,
whisper on your sacred oceans,
and let naked desire
wave sweet and secret
then surround me
and forever linger.
  

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That's pretty good stuff guest. I don't know why you don't post your poems with your name. I would be proud of something like that.

  • That's pretty good stuff guest.
  • I don't know why you don't post your poems with your name.
  • I would be proud of something like that.
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That's pretty good stuff guest. I don't know why you don't post your poems with your name. I would be proud of something like that.
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A short and powerfully descriptive poem full of imagery that entrances.
Enjoyed the read!
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I agree, you should post your name.

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