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Angel_Or_Hell Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Love story !!!
I have a story and I want to tell everybody !!! But My English is so bad, so I hope everyone corrects my mistakes.
The story begins:
It was the first time, I Made an appointment a girl. Before went to meeting place, I asked my father What did I say when I met her. My father said : "When talk to a girl, you should talk about 3 problems: first is food, Second is family, And third is the life"
She and me met in a romantic place with slow music. But both of us were motionless. I remembered my father's the first guiding. I asked her: " Do you like vegetable ?". But She still was motionless. Remembered my father's guiding, I asked her about the second problem: "Have you got brother ? ". She still was motionless. I really was embarrassed, But I still remembered my father's guiding. I asked her about the third problem: " If you had brother, would He like vegetable ?". What did she do after that....
The story begins:
It was the first time, I Made an appointment a girl. Before went to meeting place, I asked my father What did I say when I met her. My father said : "When talk to a girl, you should talk about 3 problems: first is food, Second is family, And third is the life"
She and me met in a romantic place with slow music. But both of us were motionless. I remembered my father's the first guiding. I asked her: " Do you like vegetable ?". But She still was motionless. Remembered my father's guiding, I asked her about the second problem: "Have you got brother ? ". She still was motionless. I really was embarrassed, But I still remembered my father's guiding. I asked her about the third problem: " If you had brother, would He like vegetable ?". What did she do after that....
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very nice and laughing .
- very nice and laughing .
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hi angel, its very nice!
can i correct your mistakes?
then here it is...
It was the first time, I TOOK an appointment WITH a girl. Before GOING to meeting place, I asked my father "What SHOULD I say when I meEt her"?. My father said : "When EVER YOU talk to a girl, you should talk about 3 problems: first is food, Second is family, And third is the life"
She and me(I?) me
can i correct your mistakes?
then here it is...
It was the first time, I TOOK an appointment WITH a girl. Before GOING to meeting place, I asked my father "What SHOULD I say when I meEt her"?. My father said : "When EVER YOU talk to a girl, you should talk about 3 problems: first is food, Second is family, And third is the life"
She and me(I?) me
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ok deepa I'm going to add a little
It was the first time, I 'made an appointment a girl'
You could say: 'went out
It was the first time, I 'made an appointment a girl'
You could say: 'went out
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It was my first date. Not knowing how to act or what to say, I asked the advice of my father. "When you talk to a girl, you should talk about three things: food, family, and life," he said.
She and I met in a romantic place. The music made it even more romantic. Neither of us knew what to say, so I took my father's advice. "Do you like vegatables?" I asked. No response. "Do you have a b
She and I met in a romantic place. The music made it even more romantic. Neither of us knew what to say, so I took my father's advice. "Do you like vegatables?" I asked. No response. "Do you have a b
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