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Yayya Lautner Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Love loner,
hye guys, this a poet that i wrote myself. i just want to make sure that it is grammatically correct. so i need you guys to help me. enjoy reading it
thou shall not lie to your heart,
because it's hurting yourself.
but thou can lie using your expressions and trust me that won't be long.
because that thing pumps blood all over your body, without getting blocked.
and that means all your secrets will be revealed as fast as your blood is running.
if it stops, means thou will be forgiven, fotgotten, denied and left alone in the other world. can't tell. untold.
welcome to the loner's world.
where thou will be a forever alone and your life journal is nothing more than a lonely word.
desolated always be. cry means happiness, pain means pleasure, like a cul-de-sac of a person's life.
thou can never find the way back. because there are no ways thou can get out.
as i said, thou will be a forever alone, here.
thou shall not lie to your heart,
because it's hurting yourself.
but thou can lie using your expressions and trust me that won't be long.
because that thing pumps blood all over your body, without getting blocked.
and that means all your secrets will be revealed as fast as your blood is running.
if it stops, means thou will be forgiven, fotgotten, denied and left alone in the other world. can't tell. untold.
welcome to the loner's world.
where thou will be a forever alone and your life journal is nothing more than a lonely word.
desolated always be. cry means happiness, pain means pleasure, like a cul-de-sac of a person's life.
thou can never find the way back. because there are no ways thou can get out.
as i said, thou will be a forever alone, here.
Top answer
Hi Yayya; There is such a thing as poetic licence, where poets commonly are forgiven for breaking conventional grammar rules, but most poets use proper capitalization and punctuation (a nod and a wink to e. e. " That is also true for verb forms and vocabulary.
- Hi Yayya; There is such a thing as poetic licence, where poets commonly are forgiven for breaking conventional grammar rules, but most poets use proper capitalization and punctuation (a nod and a wink to e.
- e.
- " That is also true for verb forms and vocabulary.
- If you are going to write in the style of Early Modern English, use the language consistently.
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Hi Yayya;
There is such a thing as poetic licence, where poets commonly are forgiven for breaking conventional grammar rules, but most poets use proper capitalization and punctuation (a nod and a wink to e. e. cummings)
Please read this:
"Because thou has passed out of common use, its traditional forms are often con
There is such a thing as poetic licence, where poets commonly are forgiven for breaking conventional grammar rules, but most poets use proper capitalization and punctuation (a nod and a wink to e. e. cummings)
Please read this:
"Because thou has passed out of common use, its traditional forms are often con
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