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Amna.J Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Love is a journey....

Hi all of you...

I am a new member in the EnglishForward.com .... I really enjoy your writings and poems ....
I would like to say something about :: Love ::

" My Love for you is a journey; starting at forever, and ending at never "
  

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Hmmm. I think you may have inadvertantly expressed the opposite of what you mean. I can see what you intended - starting at forever and then a play on 'never-ending'.

— Nona the brit

  • Hmmm.
  • I think you may have inadvertantly expressed the opposite of what you mean.
  • I can see what you intended - starting at forever and then a play on 'never-ending'.
  • ) Or am I just horribly cynical?
  • what does everyone else think?
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Hmmm.

I think you may have inadvertantly expressed the opposite of what you mean.

I can see what you intended - starting at forever and then a play on 'never-ending'.

However, it now reads to me as

starting at forever (starting with good intentions of it being for a lifetime)
and ending at never (I've changed my mind and I will never love you again!)
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I agree, Nona-- at best, it is ambiguous. A case of feeling overpowering sense. Nice feeling, though.

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hi dear....

Thanks dear... thats helped me a lot to think deeply in the meaning of the sentence .....
because english is not my first language .... Thank you again... I really Impressed from your wordings ... and I hope It help me learning my secound language...
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