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Learnathon Posted 14 years ago
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I hate to make this statement, but as a proud Asian American, I feel like I have to...

This is exactly why I respect and am so proud of Jeremy Lin, John Cho, Sung Kang, Yul Kwon, Michelle Kwan, Gary Locke, Steven Chu, etc..sooo many more to list, than Asian Americans who've left us and gone to greener pastures. I hate to call them sell outs, but true Americanism is to overcome obstacles and never give up on your dream. These Asian Americans are the true heroes. You stayed, you conquered, you made a name for yourself and did your Asian American community proud. I'm not trying to be divisive, but we have to be proud to be American Asians and we have to fight for what we believe is true and righteousness shall always prevail. If US AAs always back away or only live to find a larger check, we'll always be outcasted or overlooked. Jeremy Lin's proved everyone wrong and now let's see if he can a ring.

Can someone please proofread this for me?

Thank you.
  

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punctuation: American Asians, and we have to fight...
proved everyone wrong, and now let's see [if he can a ring (???)]
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Philippunctuation: American Asians, and we have to fight...proved everyone wrong, and now let's see [if he can a ring (???)]
Thank you very much for taking the time to look over my work.

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