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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago
‘Lose 30 pounds in a month’
Ad with after and before pictures
Is an elusive way to lure people.
Sweating away at the treadmill
She cursed herself for that.
Every penny went down the drain
Just like the sweat at her brow.
Up and down the dumbbells went
But not her muscle pains.
Cycling on the spot was not a sport
It was the most boring act.
Neither Aerobics nor yoga
Helped her in any way .
Weight was same but she was not.
Frail she grew and was fatigued too.
All she needed now
was beer or cranberry juice,
Along with a hot Pizza
topped with shredded cheese,
Or fresh chicken on the grill.
(Sorry, no intentions whatsoever to hurt anybody's feelings)
Losing Weight!
‘Lose 30 pounds in a month’
Ad with after and before pictures
Is an elusive way to lure people.
Sweating away at the treadmill
She cursed herself for that.
Every penny went down the drain
Just like the sweat at her brow.
Up and down the dumbbells went
But not her muscle pains.
Cycling on the spot was not a sport
It was the most boring act.
Neither Aerobics nor yoga
Helped her in any way .
Weight was same but she was not.
Frail she grew and was fatigued too.
All she needed now
was beer or cranberry juice,
Along with a hot Pizza
topped with shredded cheese,
Or fresh chicken on the grill.
(Sorry, no intentions whatsoever to hurt anybody's feelings)
Top answer
Hello Anita Just a couple of thoughts: Ad with after and before pictures ] Usually 'before and after'; though your version may be better, since less usual. ] Or maybe 'sweat of her brow'? Though I'm not averse to 'at'.
- Hello Anita Just a couple of thoughts: Ad with after and before pictures ] Usually 'before and after'; though your version may be better, since less usual.
- ] Or maybe 'sweat of her brow'?
- Though I'm not averse to 'at'.
- ] Maybe 'weight was the same'?
- Frail she grew and was fatigued too.
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Hello Anita
Just a couple of thoughts:
Ad with after and before pictures ] Usually 'before and after'; though your version may be better, since less usual.
Is an elusive way to lure people.] ?elusive
Just like the sweat at her brow.] Or maybe 'sweat of her brow'? Though I'm not averse to 'at'.
Weight was same but she was no
Just a couple of thoughts:
Ad with after and before pictures ] Usually 'before and after'; though your version may be better, since less usual.
Is an elusive way to lure people.] ?elusive
Just like the sweat at her brow.] Or maybe 'sweat of her brow'? Though I'm not averse to 'at'.
Weight was same but she was no
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Thanks Mr.P. Knowing your sense of humour, I was pretty sure, this would catch your attention.
Well, I was trying to use elusive in the sense of decietful or bafflingor evasive... all seemed to fit!
And thanks for pointing out the other mistakes...
By the way, what made you hungry, the pizza or the chicken?
Well, I was trying to use elusive in the sense of decietful or bafflingor evasive... all seemed to fit!
And thanks for pointing out the other mistakes...
By the way, what made you hungry, the pizza or the chicken?
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...what made you hungry, the pizza or the chicken?...Both...and it's doing it again...
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