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Los Angles of writing.Could everyone check the errors(gammar,vocabulary..) on passage, please?
Los Angles was the most known by two landmarks, is Hollywood and Venice Beach. Hollywood has attract everyone by the glamor and aura there. The travelers even could enjoy of feeling of the celebrity for a moment, while you are standing on Rodeo Drive street, and sunset Strip boulevards. or everyone could go to The Grauman's Chinese Theatre to take a picture with friends...
The other side ò the city of Los Angeles, Venice Beach is famous by a poetic beauty and generosity lifestyle. If you come there, you will get moments of relaxation to watch see all the colors into the life...
Could everyone check the errors(gammar,vocabulary..) on passage, please? Thanks for all.
The other side ò the city of Los Angeles, Venice Beach is famous by a poetic beauty and generosity lifestyle. If you come there, you will get moments of relaxation to watch see all the colors into the life...
Could everyone check the errors(gammar,vocabulary..) on passage, please? Thanks for all.
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Los Angeles's two most famous landmarks are Hollywood and Venice Beach. Hollywood attracts everyone with its glamorous aura. Travelers can experience a feeling of celebrity while standing on Rodeo Drive or Sunset Boulevard, or they can go to Grauman's (Mann's) Chinese Theatre to take pictures with friends.
- Los Angeles's two most famous landmarks are Hollywood and Venice Beach.
- Hollywood attracts everyone with its glamorous aura.
- Travelers can experience a feeling of celebrity while standing on Rodeo Drive or Sunset Boulevard, or they can go to Grauman's (Mann's) Chinese Theatre to take pictures with friends.
- On the other side of Los Angeles, Venice Beach is famous for its poetic beauty and generous lifestyle.
- If you go there, you can enjoy seeing all the colors of life.
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Los Angeles's two most famous landmarks are Hollywood and Venice Beach.
Hollywood attracts everyone with its glamorous aura. Travelers can experience a feeling of celebrity while standing on Rodeo Drive or Sunset Boulevard, or they can go to Grauman's (Mann's) Chinese Theatre to take pictures with friends.
On the other side of Los Angeles, Venice Beach is famous
Hollywood attracts everyone with its glamorous aura. Travelers can experience a feeling of celebrity while standing on Rodeo Drive or Sunset Boulevard, or they can go to Grauman's (Mann's) Chinese Theatre to take pictures with friends.
On the other side of Los Angeles, Venice Beach is famous
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