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Snarf Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary
Loot...together...
The loot was dinging together loudly.
Is "together" okay there? I don't want to write "The loots were..." because I think that would sound weird. Or maybe I should eliminate the need for "together" by just writing, "The loot was dinging loudly from inside them." Them refers to sacks.
Thanks.
Is "together" okay there? I don't want to write "The loots were..." because I think that would sound weird. Or maybe I should eliminate the need for "together" by just writing, "The loot was dinging loudly from inside them." Them refers to sacks.
Thanks.
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Snarf Or maybe I should eliminate the need for "together" I agree—that would solve the problem. )
- Snarf Or maybe I should eliminate the need for "together" I agree—that would solve the problem.
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SnarfOr maybe I should eliminate the need for "together"I agree—that would solve the problem. I also think that 'clanging' is a better word choice (I presume the loot is metallic?)
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