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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Looks so talented
Please check the following paragraph. Should the sentence "She looks so talented" be deleted?
This is my mother, and she is a Pisces. She wears a blue suit. She is sitting on the sofa and talking to her friends on the phone.She looks so talented. She is having coffee gracefully. Also, she is a nice cook, and she always makes delicious food for us.
This is my mother, and she is a Pisces. She wears a blue suit. She is sitting on the sofa and talking to her friends on the phone.
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Hi, I'd delete it, because the meaning seems unclear. How can someone look so talented when just sitting and talking? Clive
- Hi, I'd delete it, because the meaning seems unclear.
- How can someone look so talented when just sitting and talking?
- Clive
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Hi,
I'd delete it, because the meaning seems unclear. How can someone look so talented when just sitting and talking?
Clive
I'd delete it, because the meaning seems unclear. How can someone look so talented when just sitting and talking?
Clive
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