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Could somebody please chech the grammar in these two sentences? I would truly appreciate that!
Our fatherland acquired its current appearance thousands of years ago when the air was so cold and damp that in nowadays we call this era an ice age. When the heavy blanket of snow disappeared, in some places the land raised above and where there used to be a sea, now land revealed.
Thanks a lot!
Could somebody please chech the grammar in these two sentences? I would truly appreciate that!
Our fatherland acquired its current appearance thousands of years ago when the air was so cold and damp that in nowadays we call this era an ice age. When the heavy blanket of snow disappeared, in some places the land raised above and where there used to be a sea, now land revealed.
Thanks a lot!
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Our fatherland acquired its current appearance thousands of years ago when the air was so cold and damp that in nowadays we call this era an ice age. Grammatically, it is good as corrected, but geologically, it is rather unsound. The air is not what is important, the glaciers that carved the land, and left behind moraines, dropstones, U-shaped valleys and other landforms are.
- Our fatherland acquired its current appearance thousands of years ago when the air was so cold and damp that in nowadays we call this era an ice age.
- Grammatically, it is good as corrected, but geologically, it is rather unsound.
- The air is not what is important, the glaciers that carved the land, and left behind moraines, dropstones, U-shaped valleys and other landforms are.
- When the heavy blanket of snow disappeared, in some places the land rose , and where there used to be a sea, now land was revealed.
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Our fatherland acquired its current appearance thousands of years ago when the air was so cold and damp that in nowadays we call this era an ice age.
Grammatically, it is good as corrected, but geologically, it is rather unsound. The air is not what is important, the glaciers that carved the land, and left behind moraines, dropstones, U-shaped valleys and other landforms are.
Grammatically, it is good as corrected, but geologically, it is rather unsound. The air is not what is important, the glaciers that carved the land, and left behind moraines, dropstones, U-shaped valleys and other landforms are.
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Thank you a lot! I truly appreciate your help! Could I bother you with another quick chech? If yes, here it is:
Just like tiny birches grow into mighty trees, our forefathers, who were endowed with endurance of a red bilberry shrub and with a spite of the Northern winds, they strengthened their roots in this fertile land.
is underlined "they" necessary? And is the sentenc
Just like tiny birches grow into mighty trees, our forefathers, who were endowed with endurance of a red bilberry shrub and with a spite of the Northern winds, they strengthened their roots in this fertile land.
is underlined "they" necessary? And is the sentenc
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Just like tiny birches that grow into mighty trees, our forefathers, who were endowed with the endurance of a red bilberry shrub in stiff and with a spite of the northern winds, strengthened their roots in this fertile land.
The subject is forefathers. A second subject is incorrect.
The subject is forefathers. A second subject is incorrect.
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