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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Looking to construct a sentence without having it collapse on itself.
No matter who charges first, the end result is certain; my pike will pierce your heart. -Relon, to her enemies.
This is the sentence, but it does not seem to flow grammatically. I don't know if it is a misplaced comma or the semi-colon. This is a sentence that is meant to be read, so that does matter quite a bit. Any help is appreciated.
This is the sentence, but it does not seem to flow grammatically. I don't know if it is a misplaced comma or the semi-colon. This is a sentence that is meant to be read, so that does matter quite a bit. Any help is appreciated.
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Change the semi-colon into a colon. (I was assuming the -Relon, to her enemies. is explanatory for us.
- Change the semi-colon into a colon.
- (I was assuming the -Relon, to her enemies.
- is explanatory for us.
- If it's not, but the rest in quotes, change the .
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Change the semi-colon into a colon.
(I was assuming the -Relon, to her enemies. is explanatory for us. If it's not, but the rest in quotes, change the . to , and say something like "Relon declared to her enemies."
(I was assuming the -Relon, to her enemies. is explanatory for us. If it's not, but the rest in quotes, change the . to , and say something like "Relon declared to her enemies."
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