Looking for comments on my 250 word review.

0Hi, thanks for looking. I have been asked to write a short 250 word review of a game. I understand games are a niche subject and may not appeal to everyone. However, if you could give tips on the English used i would be very greatfull. Anything that could improve it in any way is welcome. 05002br
01font01i00Supreme Commander02i00 is a fresh addition to the real time strategy genre. This stunning, innovative game is a stand alone success among the thousands of countless clones. Lest we forget the genre defining series which sparked the initial trend, 01i00Command and Conquer02i00. War strategy games have followed the same identical conventions for years, until this. 02br
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00What defines 01i00Supreme Commander02i00 is the immense size of the battlefield and flexibility of the interface. One of the best features of all is the zoom. With a quick scroll of the mouse wheel we can easily zoom right out of the battlefield. This is useful for large scale battle management and for fighting on multiple fronts, within seconds we can also zoom right in to see unit detail or micro manage. Like all real time strategy games we have the standard build menu, however, in 01i00Supreme Commander02i00 its more of a 'complex' build menu. 02br
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00Each race can choose from hundreds of units and structures all with unique defense, attack and look. No two units of a faction act the same, all factions get a number of super units called 'Experimental Units', an artillery piece and a nuke launcher. Despite the differences in factions, this game is extremely well balanced for online play. 02br
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00Despite amazing graphics and game-play, this game has a huge learning curve. I would not recommend this to the casual gamer as this game is as far from relaxing as it could possibly be.02font02br
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00James 010id1