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Copysnake Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Looking for advices for my letter
I need to write to the author of a article for support. I wish someone could give me some advices for my letter. and thank you for your consideration and advices!
here is my letter,
Dear Mr. Hewitt,
My name is Wang Xiaowen, a postgraduate of psychology from South West University of China. I learned that the Multidimentional Perfectionism Scale developed by you and colleague is one of the most used instruments in research of perfectionism. So I wish I could get from you a copy of the MPS and the permission to use this scale in my research if it’s possible. The scale will be used only for research purpose. Thank you for your kind consideration. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Xiaowen
here is my letter,
Dear Mr. Hewitt,
My name is Wang Xiaowen, a postgraduate of psychology from South West University of China. I learned that the Multidimentional Perfectionism Scale developed by you and colleague is one of the most used instruments in research of perfectionism. So I wish I could get from you a copy of the MPS and the permission to use this scale in my research if it’s possible. The scale will be used only for research purpose. Thank you for your kind consideration. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Xiaowen
Top answer
Hello, copysnake. I think that it would be to your advantage to insert a sentence or two where I have placed an X to add a bit of detail about your research topic, the name of your research supervisor, what you hope to accomplish, how you might use the MPS, etc. Dear Mr.
- Hello, copysnake.
- I think that it would be to your advantage to insert a sentence or two where I have placed an X to add a bit of detail about your research topic, the name of your research supervisor, what you hope to accomplish, how you might use the MPS, etc.
- Dear Mr.
- Hewitt, My name is **** Xiaowen, a postgraduate in Psychology at South West University of China.
- I understand that the Multi dimensional Perfectionism Scale (MPS) developed by you and Dr Flett is one of the most-used instruments in research on perfectionism , and so I am hoping that you might be willing to provide me with a copy of the MPS and permission to use this scale in my research.
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Hello, copysnake. I think that it would be to your advantage to insert a sentence or two where I have placed an X to add a bit of detail about your research topic, the name of your research supervisor, what you hope to accomplish, how you might use the MPS, etc.
Dear Mr. Hewitt,
My name is **** Xiaowen, a postgraduate in Psychology at South West Unive
Dear Mr. Hewitt,
My name is **** Xiaowen, a postgraduate in Psychology at South West Unive
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Hello, Mister Micawber. Thank you very much for your great help! I think I have learned so much from your advices. I learned how to express my honor and ask for support politely. And I noticed it is a mistake, probably a terrible one, not to mention the name of the second author of that article. Again, thank you for your careful consideration and great help!
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