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Speedoz Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Looking for a job
Hello,
I want to send the following message to one of my contacts asking him to help me to find a job.
Kindly review it and let me know if it doesn't sound English.
Also Please keep into your consideration that It's true that I have an experience in marketing and PR but I don't mind to work in a different industry and change my career.
The message:
Dear ... ,
I was wondering If you can give me a hand in finding a job.
I’m looking for a job in marketing or PR fields.
Currently I live in Kuwait, but If I get a serious offer, I don’t mind at all to move back to Egypt or any other place in the world.
If you can help, kindly send me your e-mail address so I can pass you my resume.
Thanks a lot.
I want to send the following message to one of my contacts asking him to help me to find a job.
Kindly review it and let me know if it doesn't sound English.
Also Please keep into your consideration that It's true that I have an experience in marketing and PR but I don't mind to work in a different industry and change my career.
The message:
Dear ... ,
I was wondering If you can give me a hand in finding a job.
I’m looking for a job in marketing or PR fields.
Currently I live in Kuwait, but If I get a serious offer, I don’t mind at all to move back to Egypt or any other place in the world.
If you can help, kindly send me your e-mail address so I can pass you my resume.
Thanks a lot.
Top answer
Dear Speedoz, Here is my edition of your letter. I have left it in the informal style you adopted because you said you intended to send it to a contact you know. Please bear in mind that this letter is extremely informal and that I advise you to send it only to someone you know fairly well.
- Dear Speedoz, Here is my edition of your letter.
- I have left it in the informal style you adopted because you said you intended to send it to a contact you know.
- Please bear in mind that this letter is extremely informal and that I advise you to send it only to someone you know fairly well.
- Cheers, John Dear ...
- , I was wondering If you could give me a hand in finding a job?
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Dear Speedoz,
Here is my edition of your letter. I have left it in the informal style you adopted because you said you intended to send it to a contact you know. Please bear in mind that this letter is extremely informal and that I advise you to send it only to someone you know fairly well.
Cheers,
John
Dear ... ,
I was wondering If you could giv
Here is my edition of your letter. I have left it in the informal style you adopted because you said you intended to send it to a contact you know. Please bear in mind that this letter is extremely informal and that I advise you to send it only to someone you know fairly well.
Cheers,
John
Dear ... ,
I was wondering If you could giv
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Yes, I will send it to a closed friend
Thank you very much for your help
Thank you very much for your help
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