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Yaceq Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Looking for a help :) - homework
Hello mates.
On the beginning I would like to say, that I have been looking for a board like this for the years. I can't belive I found it !
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Let me tell you a little about myself. I am 17 years boy, who lives in Poland. I learn English for a few years (but it still sux ), and I am looking for a help with my English. I hope so you are gonna help me.
Ok let's start
I have a homework to my school, which is:
"You have the name and address pf an English language student in another country. Write them a short letter in which you:
- introduce yourself
-describe your everyday routine
- say what you like doing in you free time."
Dear Piotrek,
My name is Jacek and I am 17 years old. I live in Wroclaw, in Poland, with my parents and sister. Now I am learning in secondary
school in a class mathematical - computer-science.
Let me tell you a little about my everyday routine. I usually wake up at 7.20 a.m. After washing myself and eating breakfast
I get a bus to school. After school, usually about 4 p.m I start doing my homeworks. I hate that, but you know it doesn't depend
on me. I often go sleep about 12 pm.
Now I am going to tell you something about my activities that I enjoy in my free time. Almost all my free time I spend
surfing the internet. I love this. Actually I think it is one of the best "things" which have ever been
invented. I am not able to tell you, how many times I spend surfing the Internet, because during doing this I am cut off off from the rest
of the world. Of course the internet is not the only thing I love. Sleeping is a second thing, but what should I write you
about that ? Actually, I think, I do not have to explain anyone anything about sleeping.
Write soon and tell me about you !
Best wishes, Jacek
On the beginning I would like to say, that I have been looking for a board like this for the years. I can't belive I found it !
(And who's realdeleted:mod )Let me tell you a little about myself. I am 17 years boy, who lives in Poland. I learn English for a few years (but it still sux
), and I am looking for a help with my English. I hope so you are gonna help me.Ok let's start
I have a homework to my school, which is:
"You have the name and address pf an English language student in another country. Write them a short letter in which you:
- introduce yourself
-describe your everyday routine
- say what you like doing in you free time."
Dear Piotrek,
My name is Jacek and I am 17 years old. I live in Wroclaw, in Poland, with my parents and sister. Now I am learning in secondary
school in a class mathematical - computer-science.
Let me tell you a little about my everyday routine. I usually wake up at 7.20 a.m. After washing myself and eating breakfast
I get a bus to school. After school, usually about 4 p.m I start doing my homeworks. I hate that, but you know it doesn't depend
on me. I often go sleep about 12 pm.
Now I am going to tell you something about my activities that I enjoy in my free time. Almost all my free time I spend
surfing the internet. I love this. Actually I think it is one of the best "things" which have ever been
invented. I am not able to tell you, how many times I spend surfing the Internet, because during doing this I am cut off off from the rest
of the world. Of course the internet is not the only thing I love. Sleeping is a second thing, but what should I write you
about that ? Actually, I think, I do not have to explain anyone anything about sleeping.
Write soon and tell me about you !
Best wishes, Jacek
Top answer
Hi Jacek, This is a nice chatty letter and quite nicely written. You should take a second look at these parts though:in a class; often go sleep;"things" which have; tell you, how many times; during doing this;is a second thing; anyone anything. In addtition, I deleted a word from your question as it is one which most people find highly offensive.
- Hi Jacek, This is a nice chatty letter and quite nicely written.
- You should take a second look at these parts though:in a class; often go sleep;"things" which have; tell you, how many times; during doing this;is a second thing; anyone anything.
- In addtition, I deleted a word from your question as it is one which most people find highly offensive.
- I understand it is used in some contexts, but this is usually in a 'peer-group' situation (and that is highly controversial ) and you should be wary of using it without knowing who will encounter it.
- What a black rap singer can get away with (although still offending some people) with is one thing, but what you can post on the internet is something else.
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Hi Jacek,
This is a nice chatty letter and quite nicely written. You should take a second look at these parts though:in a class; often go sleep;"things" which have; tell you, how many times; during doing this;is a second thing; anyone anything.
In addtition, I deleted a word from your question as it is one which most people find highly offensive. I understand it is used in s
This is a nice chatty letter and quite nicely written. You should take a second look at these parts though:in a class; often go sleep;"things" which have; tell you, how many times; during doing this;is a second thing; anyone anything.
In addtition, I deleted a word from your question as it is one which most people find highly offensive. I understand it is used in s
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nona the brit,
I had seen that too and wasn't sure what to make of it. Glad you are more adept at this than I am.
MountainHiker
I had seen that too and wasn't sure what to make of it. Glad you are more adept at this than I am.
MountainHiker
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Hello,
On the beginning I'd like to thank you for your help. I really appreciate that. According to this word (you know which one
On the beginning I'd like to thank you for your help. I really appreciate that. According to this word (you know which one
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Hi Jacek,
Try these
'I am currently studying maths and computers at a secondary school in Wroclaw.
Homework is a non-count noun so the plural is still homework.
I usually go to bed(I'm sure you don't go bad after midnight, you sound like something from a horror movie!
Try these
'I am currently studying maths and computers at a secondary school in Wroclaw.
Homework is a non-count noun so the plural is still homework.
I usually go to bed(I'm sure you don't go bad after midnight, you sound like something from a horror movie!
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