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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Looked after them

A man escorted Jenna out of an office and into the elevator. Bill looked after them, suspicious.


Is the emboldened sentence OK and clear for the context?

  

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Bill looked after them, suspicious. This is not wrong, but I prefer Suspicious, Bill looked after them. ------------------------------------------ Are you sure an office i s OK for your context?

  • Bill looked after them, suspicious.
  • This is not wrong, but I prefer Suspicious, Bill looked after them.
  • ------------------------------------------ Are you sure an office i s OK for your context?
  • Clive
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Bill looked after them, suspicious. This is not wrong, but I prefer

Suspicious, Bill looked after them.

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Are you sure an office is OK for your context?

Clive

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