A man escorted Jenna out of an office and into the elevator. Bill looked after them, suspicious.
Is the emboldened sentence OK and clear for the context?
Bill looked after them, suspicious. This is not wrong, but I prefer Suspicious, Bill looked after them. ------------------------------------------ Are you sure an office i s OK for your context?
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Bill looked after them, suspicious. This is not wrong, but I prefer
Suspicious, Bill looked after them.
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Are you sure an office is OK for your context?
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