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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Look over and correct if there is anything wrong with this grammartically or logically.
Living in a city, where there are a lot of concrete buildings and being functional is always more important than anything else, I seldom realize the slight change of seasons because I have few opportunities to hear birds and insects singing and see unknown trees and plants there. I can understand that more and more people are moving to the countryside these days in order to make their lives more relaxing and interesting.
Thank you.
Living in a city, where there are a lot of concrete buildings and being functional is always more important than anything else, I seldom realize the slight change of seasons because I have few opportunities to hear birds and insects singing and see unknown trees and plants there. I can understand that more and more people are moving to the countryside these days in order to make their lives more relaxing and interesting.
Thank you.
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Anonymous Look over and correct if there is anything wrong with this grammartically or logically. My first suggestion would be to add the word 'please' to that sentence.
- Anonymous Look over and correct if there is anything wrong with this grammartically or logically.
- My first suggestion would be to add the word 'please' to that sentence.
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AnonymousLook over and correct if there is anything wrong with this grammartically or logically.My first suggestion would be to add the word 'please' to that sentence.
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I'm sorry for my rudeness. Please look over and correct if there is anything wrong with this grammartically or logically.
Living in a city, where there are a lot of concrete buildings and being functional is always more important than anything else, I seldom realize the slight change of seasons because I have few opportunities to hear birds and insects singing and see unknown trees and pl
Living in a city, where there are a lot of concrete buildings and being functional is always more important than anything else, I seldom realize the slight change of seasons because I have few opportunities to hear birds and insects singing and see unknown trees and pl
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Thank you very much for your reply.
I feel strongly the difficulty of writing in English once again.
Thank you very much.
I feel strongly the difficulty of writing in English once again.
Thank you very much.
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AnonymousThank you very much for your reply.You're most welcome.
AnonymousI feel strongly the difficulty of writing in English once again.In fairness, I must say that your grammar skills are not bad at all. It's just that you need to slow down a bit and think about how to clearly express your ideas.
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Living in a city, where there are a lot of concrete buildings and everyone is always on the move, I seldom notice the slight change of seasons because I have few opportunities to listen to birds and insects singing and observe unknown trees and plants there.
I can understand why more and more people are moving to the countryside; it is
I can understand why more and more people are moving to the countryside; it is
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Thank you very much for your reply.
The fact is, this passage has the original and I translated it into English.
I used the word “unknown” to say “trees and plants whose names I do not know.”
I also used “these days” instead of “in recent years” because the tense of this sentence is the present progressive form.
Is this sentence OK? “In recent years, more and more people have be
The fact is, this passage has the original and I translated it into English.
I used the word “unknown” to say “trees and plants whose names I do not know.”
I also used “these days” instead of “in recent years” because the tense of this sentence is the present progressive form.
Is this sentence OK? “In recent years, more and more people have be
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AnonymousI have few opportunities to hear birdsI have few opportunities to hear birds singing. Insects are not generally known to sing, unlike birds.and insectssinging
Anonymousand see unknown trees and plants there.That is odd because, trees are also plant
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Thank you very much for the minute points you have raised.
Those are really helpful in learning writing in English.
Thank you very much.
Those are really helpful in learning writing in English.
Thank you very much.
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