Look from ourselves

Question

Please help me correct the following sentences.

1. The third way we looked sleeping problems from ourselves.
2. We used the information which we surfed on the Internet or the message which teachers taught us to prove that information is true or not really correct.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Please help me correct the following sentences.

1. The third way we looked sleeping problems from ourselves. Sorry, I have no idea what this means.

2. We used the information which we surfed on the Internet or the message which teachers taught us to prove that information is true or not really correct.

I have to try to guess your meaning.
eg We used the information which we surfed for on the Internet, or the information which teachers gave us, to prove whether something was correct.
This still doesn't sound good.

Clive

Contiluo · Answer

The original context as written:

Special topic report on insomnia

Method

The Ways & the people
The first way we used the most was searching on the Internet. We search the Web sites of doctors, hospitals, and even colleges.

The second way is asking people:the people such as the PE teachers, friends, family, students or the teacher who works in the health center.

We asked these questions:
1. Have you ever had trouble sleeping?
2. What do you think was the reason for your insomnia?
3. How did you solve this problem?

The third way we tested and verified our own sleeping problems. We used the information which we surfed on the Internet, or the information which teachers taught us, to prove that whether the information was correct or not.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

Let me offer a revised version for you to consider.

Special Report on Insomnia

Methods

1. We mainly searched the Internet, looking at sites run by doctors, hospitals, and even colleges.

2. We asked people such as the PE teachers, the teacher who works in the health center, students, friends, and family..

The questions were:
Have you ever had trouble sleeping?
What do you think was the reason for your insomnia?
How did you solve this problem?

3. We tested and analyzed our own sleeping problems.

This part is still not clear to me.Try to say it another way, perhaps in more than one sentence.

We used the information which we surfed on the Internet, or the information which teachers taught us, to prove that whether the information<<<< what information? was correct or not.

Clive

Contiluo · Answer

3.  We looked at our own sleeping problems, and then used the above methods to test and analyze our own sleeping problems.  We used the information which we surfed on the Internet, from some sort of survey, or the information which teachers taught us, to check whether they were correct of not.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

I suggest just this.
We looked at our own sleeping problems, and then used the above methods to test and analyze them.

Clive

Look from ourselves

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