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Sun 94 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Look back at the question...
Please correct me if you see any mistakes.
(Teacher to students)
1. Many of you pointed out this in discussing the good points of objective test. It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers, but when you look back at the question, you will have to realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuessed it from teacher's perspective.
2. What about the following sentneces? Can you identify any problems or mistakes? What do you think of t his sentence? Don't you think it is too wordy? You should express your ideas more breifly and concisely. ...
3. You should express your ideas using a sentence.That is , you should express your ideas using one subject and one verb...
4. Also, you have to be careful about the vocabulalry. For example, many mentioned OMR card, but many native speakers don't understnad what OMR card is.
(Teacher to students)
1. Many of you pointed out this in discussing the good points of objective test. It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers, but when you look back at the question, you will have to realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuessed it from teacher's perspective.
2. What about the following sentneces? Can you identify any problems or mistakes? What do you think of t his sentence? Don't you think it is too wordy? You should express your ideas more breifly and concisely. ...
3. You should express your ideas using a sentence.That is , you should express your ideas using one subject and one verb...
4. Also, you have to be careful about the vocabulalry. For example, many mentioned OMR card, but many native speakers don't understnad what OMR card is.
Top answer
I have underlined some problems: 1. Many of you pointed out this in discussing the good points of objective test. It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers , but when you look back at the question, you will have to realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuessed it from teacher's perspective.
- I have underlined some problems: 1.
- Many of you pointed out this in discussing the good points of objective test.
- It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers , but when you look back at the question, you will have to realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuessed it from teacher's perspective.
- 2.
- What about the following sentneces ?
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I have underlined some problems:
1. Many of you pointed out this in discussing the good points of objective test. It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers, but when you look back at the question, you will have to realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuessed it from teacher's perspective.
2. What a
1. Many of you pointed out this in discussing the good points of objective test. It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers, but when you look back at the question, you will have to realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuessed it from teacher's perspective.
2. What a
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This is the way I changed the mistakes. Any commnets?
1. Many of you pointed out this(?) in discussing the good points of an objective test. It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers, ( the teachers' perspective) but when you look back at the question, you will have to ( have to) realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuess
1. Many of you pointed out this(?) in discussing the good points of an objective test. It could be convincing from the perspective of teachers, ( the teachers' perspective) but when you look back at the question, you will have to ( have to) realize that you gave the wrong argument because you discuess
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Please just revise your original with the changes you deem correct, and post the revised text.
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