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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Look Back
oday i was looking back on some of the tools we used in Real Estate back in 1998 above is copy of the cover of our
MLS book of the REALTORS Association of Bowling Green & South Central Kentucky Inc which is a listing of the properties in our association.t he date of this cover is February 5, 1998 which is a little over thirteen years old . Don't think i had any type of phone at all during that time that got me to thinking how technology has changed now we have smartphones we can look up data on our phones we can access data over the internet from our homes on our computers scan data e-mail data anywhere there is internet connection via computer.
That got me to thinking what will the future be like for Real Estate i predict we will do less driving around to see properties we can gather and look at all we will need from a office Home or Cafe or whatever we will grant showing by remote access from our phones or computers what about our cars how will they be equipped when we go to visual showing there will always be clients that want the visual showing how will we get there we will use something like our gps we will enter the destination sit back and it will guide us there with the ability to stop by Starbuck's for coffee when we get to Starbuck's our order will be delivered via infrared technology Battery powered vehicles will be no longer
we will be powered by some type of drone type technology the operators will be called drone controllers those will be the new jobs of the future would be interesting to put in a time capsule and open in twenty years and see how many i missed or how accurate i was that's it until the next time
MLS book of the REALTORS Association of Bowling Green & South Central Kentucky Inc which is a listing of the properties in our association.t he date of this cover is February 5, 1998 which is a little over thirteen years old . Don't think i had any type of phone at all during that time that got me to thinking how technology has changed now we have smartphones we can look up data on our phones we can access data over the internet from our homes on our computers scan data e-mail data anywhere there is internet connection via computer.
That got me to thinking what will the future be like for Real Estate i predict we will do less driving around to see properties we can gather and look at all we will need from a office Home or Cafe or whatever we will grant showing by remote access from our phones or computers what about our cars how will they be equipped when we go to visual showing there will always be clients that want the visual showing how will we get there we will use something like our gps we will enter the destination sit back and it will guide us there with the ability to stop by Starbuck's for coffee when we get to Starbuck's our order will be delivered via infrared technology Battery powered vehicles will be no longer
we will be powered by some type of drone type technology the operators will be called drone controllers those will be the new jobs of the future would be interesting to put in a time capsule and open in twenty years and see how many i missed or how accurate i was that's it until the next time
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Hi, You have a lot of sentences here that are all just sort of squished together. Each sentence has to start with a capital letter and end with a period (or some other suitable punctuation, eg a question mark). If you don't do that, most people will not bother to try to read your writing.
- Hi, You have a lot of sentences here that are all just sort of squished together.
- Each sentence has to start with a capital letter and end with a period (or some other suitable punctuation, eg a question mark).
- If you don't do that, most people will not bother to try to read your writing.
- It makes it too much work.
- If you want to try to edit this and repost it, I'd be happy to look at it again for you.
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Hi,
You have a lot of sentences here that are all just sort of squished together.
Each sentence has to start with a capital letter and end with a period (or some other suitable punctuation, eg a question mark). If you don't do that, most people will not bother to try to read
You have a lot of sentences here that are all just sort of squished together.
Each sentence has to start with a capital letter and end with a period (or some other suitable punctuation, eg a question mark). If you don't do that, most people will not bother to try to read
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