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Ty123 Posted 8 years ago
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Is this okay: I want you to like me for me and not because of these gifts but I’m giving you this necklace hoping that you’d say yes to being my girlfriend.
  

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Largely this is OK (in a conversational or chatty style of English). "you'd" should be "you'll", and I would also put a comma after "gifts".

  • Largely this is OK (in a conversational or chatty style of English).
  • "you'd" should be "you'll", and I would also put a comma after "gifts".
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Largely this is OK (in a conversational or chatty style of English).

"you'd" should be "you'll", and I would also put a comma after "gifts".

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