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Da Cutest Posted 22 years ago

Lonely Nights

Lonely Nights


here i lie in my bed
hugging my teady bear
hopelessly trying to sleep
but its as though my head
is refusing to take u out of its midst

here i lie in my bed
with the long lonely night ahead
with all my fears to dread
and i wonder if u at the same time in ur bed
feel the same .. and its blowing my head

after my heart was dead
u awoke it and gave it a reason to live
now it beats ur love every sec

even if materially ur far away
spiritualy in it you're risedent

but im still alone and sleepless in my bed
wondering when is this going to end ?
  

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I wonder how people write such good poetry!

— Deepa

  • I wonder how people write such good poetry!
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I wonder how people write such good poetry!
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write what u feel ..
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Hey, Da cutest, why did you steal my poem? You know I wrote that poem. Anyway the original ending was different:
I wanna be with you, my love, tonight.
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what ?

what did u write?

i wrote that ..

Emotion: tongue tied ***
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Gosh, maybe I have dreamt I wrote it. I promise it was the very same poem, except for the ending.
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really ..
well i wrote that weeks ago ..
but im getting to feel it again these days ..
so i posted it ..
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Gosh, are you trying to deprive me of my sleep? Is that it?
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Because I'll be thinking you are thinking the same as I am thinking. Gosh, I still remember some sleepless summer nights!
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lool .. Great Minds Think Alike ..Emotion: wink

oh .. talk about sleeping ..
my love storey with sleeping is subnormal .. im such a
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