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Stevenukd Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

LOITER AFTER CLASS

- You should go home to help your mom cook and don't loiter after class.

- Does this sentence sound natural?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.
  

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More natural options: Don't loiter after class. You should go home and help your mom with the cooking. You should go home to help your mom cook, and not loiter after class.

— Avangi

  • More natural options: Don't loiter after class.
  • You should go home and help your mom with the cooking.
  • You should go home to help your mom cook, and not loiter after class.
  • - A.
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More natural options:

Don't loiter after class. You should go home and help your mom with the cooking.

You should go home to help your mom cook, and not loiter after class.

- A.
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Stevenukd- You should go home to help your mom cook and don't loiter after class.

- Does this sentence sound natural?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Stevenukd.

"Don't" should be reduced to "not" [goes with 'you should']
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