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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
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Location of the underlined part

Hi!

Is the underlined part okay where it is?

Sports Complex “XXX” is the most popular location for competitions and camps of both several winter sports (cross-country skiing etc.) and summer sports (BMX etc.) in Peernus district.

Thank you!
  

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'Both several' is no good. *** Sports Complex is the most popular venue in the Peernus district for competitions and camps of several winter and summer sports. There is no point in writing 'cross-country skiing, etc' because no one can be sure of what 'etc' might mean there.

  • 'Both several' is no good.
  • *** Sports Complex is the most popular venue in the Peernus district for competitions and camps of several winter and summer sports.
  • There is no point in writing 'cross-country skiing, etc' because no one can be sure of what 'etc' might mean there.
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'Both several' is no good.

*** Sports Complex is the most popular venue in the Peernus district for competitions and camps of several winter and summer sports.

There is no point in writing 'cross-country skiing, etc' because no one can be sure of what 'etc' might mean there.

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