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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Loan Application

Could you please assist me on the below mail i have composed regarding my salary loan application which should be sent to my manager for approval:

Good day,

Would like to request your approval for my application of 1month salary loan that will be used for my daughter's tuition fee to be deducted on my salary.

Thank you very much indeed for your consideration.

Best Regards,

JM
  

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Here is a suggestion: I am writing to request your approval of an application for a loan in the amount of one month's salary. The purpose of the loan is to pay my daughter's tuition fee. I understand that this will be deducted from my salary.

  • Here is a suggestion: I am writing to request your approval of an application for a loan in the amount of one month's salary.
  • The purpose of the loan is to pay my daughter's tuition fee.
  • I understand that this will be deducted from my salary.
  • Thank you very much indeed for your consideration.
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Here is a suggestion:

I am writing to request your approval of an application for a loan in the amount of one month's salary. The purpose of the loan is to pay my daughter's tuition fee. I understand that this will be deducted from my salary.
Thank you very much indeed for your consideration.

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