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User_gary Posted 16 years ago
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Living cockroach, living fishes
There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes which just caught from the sea, and the living(not died) fishes were jumping in his tray here and there without water for breathing.
In what should be a socking transpire. He was alive but the doctor declared brought dead and shockingly the man sat up when he was about to set to fire.
I stepped on the cockroach but it's still living (not died). It is rolling over with their body up and down for their life.
Please correct my sentences and suggest better versions too. Thank you.
In what should be a socking transpire. He was alive but the doctor declared brought dead and shockingly the man sat up when he was about to set to fire.
I stepped on the cockroach but it's still living (not died). It is rolling over with their body up and down for their life.
Please correct my sentences and suggest better versions too. Thank you.
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I have underlined some problem areas: There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes which just caught from the sea , and t he living(not died) fishes they were jumping in his tray here and there without water for breathing . In what should be a socking transpire. He was alive but the doctor declared brought dead and shockingly the man sat up when he was about to set to fire.
- I have underlined some problem areas: There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes which just caught from the sea , and t he living(not died) fishes they were jumping in his tray here and there without water for breathing .
- In what should be a socking transpire.
- He was alive but the doctor declared brought dead and shockingly the man sat up when he was about to set to fire.
- I stepped on the cockroach but it 's still living (not died).
- It is rolling over with their body up and down for their life .
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I have underlined some problem areas:
There was a fisherman selling fresh fisheswhich just caught from the sea, and the living(not died) fishes they were jumping in his tray here and there without water for breathing.
In what should be a socking transpire. He was alive but the doctor declared
There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes
In what should be a socking transpire. He was alive but the doctor declared
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Thank you Mister Micawber.
There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes which caught in sea, and as they can't hold breath without water, rolling over the tray.
In what should be a shocking happening. The doctor declared him died when he was infact alive. It come to know when the dead man sat up when he was abo
There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes which caught in sea, and as they can't hold breath without water, rolling over the tray.
In what should be a shocking happening. The doctor declared him died when he was infact alive. It come to know when the dead man sat up when he was abo
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I have underlined some problems again and crossed out unnecessary verbiage:
There was a fisherman selling fresh fisheswhich caught in sea, and as they can't hold breath without water, rolling over the tray.
In what should be a shocking happening (This is n
There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes
In what should be a shocking happening (This is n
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Again Thanks Mister Micawber. Again here is my try
There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes which was caught from the X sea. The fishes was alive in the tray jumping up and down and it's about to die shortly as it couldn't breadth without water.
I what should be a shoc
There was a fisherman selling fresh fishes which was caught from the X sea. The fishes was alive in the tray jumping up and down and it's about to die shortly as it couldn't breadth without water.
I what should be a shoc
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There was a fisherman selling fresh fish caught in the X Sea. The fish were still alive.
It was shocking. The person who was about to be buried sat up at his funeral. The man who was admitted to X hospital for Y disease was declared dead in the late evening yesterday by Dr Z. To everyone's surprise, the man got up whe
It was shocking. The person who was about to be buried sat up at his funeral. The man who was admitted to X hospital for Y disease was declared dead in the late evening yesterday by Dr Z. To everyone's surprise, the man got up whe
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Hi,
Please allow me to comment that English learners on the Forum seem to love the word 'fishes'.
Please allow me to comment that English learners on the Forum seem to love the word 'fishes'.
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