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Tuongvan Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Live well or kindly

Hi teachers,
Can I say these ?

Studying Marxism means learning how to live kindly and loyally with the people. Living unkindly and disloyally can't be called Marxism.

Studying Marxism means learning how to live kindly as human beings.Living unkindly and disloyally can't be called Marxism.

Thank you in advance
  

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I don't think much of your adjective choices; they are not much used in mature writing. I have suggested others: Studying Marxism means learning how to live cooperatively with other people. Living uncooperatively can't be called Marxism.

— Mister Micawber

  • I don't think much of your adjective choices; they are not much used in mature writing.
  • I have suggested others: Studying Marxism means learning how to live cooperatively with other people.
  • Living uncooperatively can't be called Marxism.
  • Studying Marxism means learning how to live as social beings working or acting together willingly for a common purpose or benefit .
  • Living antisocially can't be called Marxism.
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I don't think much of your adjective choices; they are not much used in mature writing. I have suggested others:

Studying Marxism means learning how to live cooperatively with other people. Living uncooperatively can't be called Marxism.

Studying Marxism means learning how to live as social beings working or acting together wil
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Thank you Mister Micawber, but I am afraid" l cooperatively " does not convey exactly what my president Ho Chi Minh wanted to say.He said that a true communist must treat other people with kindness and deep affection.
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An unrealistic approach; those are qualities that cannot be legislated. That is why your sentences sound oddly immature.
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