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Zabela Posted 17 years ago
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Little text about a thesis - could anybody help me?
Hello! Could anybody, please, correct this little text about my thesis?
It's gotta be in English and I am a bit insecure..
Thanks you very much!
The Carnation Revolution, occurred in April 25th 1974, was a democratic movement that overthrown, in only one day, António de Oliveira Salazar regime, known as ‘New State’, in Portugal, and that was already longing 41 years (the longest authoritarian regime in Occidental Europe). With the effective support of the Portuguese population, that walked through Lisbon streets carrying red carnation flowers, the initiative had the non-violence as main point.
The Brazilian military dictatorship – which begun through a coup in 1964, ended up just in 1985, after fights and claims from many political and civil sectors. Both had periods in common, but only ten years past the end of the dictatorship in Lusitanian lands, Brazilian people was back to democracy.
During all those years, the media was one of the principal protagonist, thus for censorships, hidden critics, persecution of journalists and the link between some communication companies and the government.
Not only for the historical roots, but also for the diplomatic affairs, Brazil and Portugal has always been friend nations, with strong trade relations. For this reason, political subjects involving these States would have obvious space in both Brazilian and Portuguese Medias.
The objective of this thesis is comprehending how the Brazilian journalism notified facts referred to the Carnation Revolution, during Ernesto Geisel government and still under the military censorship.
Through lectures, old newspaper article reading, specialized books and interviews, the research intends to use terms and concepts of the French School of the Discourse Analysis to analyze the influence of the censorship and the editorial lines of the news to bring to publish the ‘April 25th’. The Brazilian newspapers __ and __ reflect their importance and credibility during the 70th.
It's gotta be in English and I am a bit insecure..
Thanks you very much!
The Carnation Revolution, occurred in April 25th 1974, was a democratic movement that overthrown, in only one day, António de Oliveira Salazar regime, known as ‘New State’, in Portugal, and that was already longing 41 years (the longest authoritarian regime in Occidental Europe). With the effective support of the Portuguese population, that walked through Lisbon streets carrying red carnation flowers, the initiative had the non-violence as main point.
The Brazilian military dictatorship – which begun through a coup in 1964, ended up just in 1985, after fights and claims from many political and civil sectors. Both had periods in common, but only ten years past the end of the dictatorship in Lusitanian lands, Brazilian people was back to democracy.
During all those years, the media was one of the principal protagonist, thus for censorships, hidden critics, persecution of journalists and the link between some communication companies and the government.
Not only for the historical roots, but also for the diplomatic affairs, Brazil and Portugal has always been friend nations, with strong trade relations. For this reason, political subjects involving these States would have obvious space in both Brazilian and Portuguese Medias.
The objective of this thesis is comprehending how the Brazilian journalism notified facts referred to the Carnation Revolution, during Ernesto Geisel government and still under the military censorship.
Through lectures, old newspaper article reading, specialized books and interviews, the research intends to use terms and concepts of the French School of the Discourse Analysis to analyze the influence of the censorship and the editorial lines of the news to bring to publish the ‘April 25th’. The Brazilian newspapers __ and __ reflect their importance and credibility during the 70th.
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The Carnation Revolution, occurred in April 25th 1974, was a democratic movement that overthrown, in only one day, António de Oliveira Salazar regime, known as ‘New State', and that was already longing 41 years in Portugal (the longest authoritarian regime in Occidental Europe).
- The Carnation Revolution, occurred in April 25th 1974, was a democratic movement that overthrown, in only one day, António de Oliveira Salazar regime, known as ‘New State', and that was already longing 41 years in Portugal (the longest authoritarian regime in Occidental Europe).
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The Carnation Revolution, occurred in April 25th 1974, was a democratic movement that overthrown, in only one day, António de Oliveira Salazar regime, known as ‘New State', and that was already longing 41 years in Portugal(the longest authoritarian regime in Occidental Europe).
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Hi,
Could anybody, please, correct this little text about my thesis?
It's gotta be in English and I am a bit insecure..
Thanks you very much!
I have to tell you that yourEnglish is not bad, but you still have a lot of errors in your text. Are you still studying English? Are you expected to have perfect English?
I just hav
Could anybody, please, correct this little text about my thesis?
It's gotta be in English and I am a bit insecure..
Thanks you very much!
I have to tell you that yourEnglish is not bad, but you still have a lot of errors in your text. Are you still studying English? Are you expected to have perfect English?
I just hav
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Thank you for the edits.
Actually, that was a literal translation from the original. And, yes, the text has got to be in perfect English by the time I will handle it.
Actually, that was a literal translation from the original. And, yes, the text has got to be in perfect English by the time I will handle it.
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Hi,
You're welcome.
It's better if you post your text in a form that is as correct as you can make it. That way, I won't waste time correcting things that you already know need correcting.
Clive
You're welcome.
It's better if you post your text in a form that is as correct as you can make it. That way, I won't waste time correcting things that you already know need correcting.
Clive
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