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MidnightSpark Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Little help, please?
I'm going over a story for someone, and came across this line;
The early winter morning moonlight reflected off the blanket of snow outside.
Something feels wrong with it, but for the life of me, I can't figure out what. It may just be the way I am reading it in my head. Thanks in advance for any help!
The early winter morning moonlight reflected off the blanket of snow outside.
Something feels wrong with it, but for the life of me, I can't figure out what. It may just be the way I am reading it in my head. Thanks in advance for any help!
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MidnightSpark The early winter morning moonlight This does seem a little dense. But it's technically okay. I think the idea of moonlight in the morning takes a little time to digest.
- MidnightSpark The early winter morning moonlight This does seem a little dense.
- But it's technically okay.
- I think the idea of moonlight in the morning takes a little time to digest.
- Perhaps smaller bites.
- The moonlight, still lingering in the early winter morning, reflected etc.
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MidnightSparkThe early winter morning moonlightThis does seem a little dense. But it's technically okay.
I think the idea of moonlight in the morning takes a little time to digest. Perhaps smaller bites.
The moonlight, still lingering in the early winter morning, reflected etc.
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