Hi,
I'm french and this is my coverring letter for a video game job. I hope you can tell me my mistakes and thank you in advance

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the position of "French online games support Agent" as I find the position very interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.
I think my experience will be beneficial, indeed, this year, I worked as a maintenance technician for many companies because I was in temporary work but since March to September, I was a software and hardware hotline technician so I know the rules of the customer support and how it works.
Also, I think this job will be for me a great opportunity to combine my work skills with one of my passion, online video games.
I am confident that my qualifications will be of interestto you, and I look forward to hearing from you
Thank you for your attention,
Yours truly,
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