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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing

Little Email sent for spontaneous application (Help please!)

Hi everyone,

I'm currently seeking for new job opportunities, so I send some spontaneous applications by email, with CV and Covering letter enclosed.

The fact is that I'm not totally confortable with the email I wrote for this occasion. Here is the main lines :

"Dear Mr XXXX, I am pleased to present my spontaneous application for an internship (or contract, depending on your needs) as XXX. After 4 years in the Pharmaceutical, I am considering a new step in my career with the objective to [.....]. I am wondering whether you could give me an appointment to give me the opportunity to convince you that I might be the right person for the right internship/position. In this regard, you will find enclosed my resume and my application letter. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further details. I thank you in advance, Mr XXX, for your consideration of my enthusiasm to work at XXX. Yours faithfully,"

Could you help me improving this email ? Did I write some non-English sentences ?

Thanks a lot in advance for your help.
  

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Any help would be welcome Thanks a lot everyone !

  • Any help would be welcome Thanks a lot everyone !
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Any help would be welcome Emotion: smile

Thanks a lot everyone !
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Sorry I'm on a train at moment and viewing this on my phone, but saw your post. Hope this helps, I can't see a date you posted this, so I also hope it is timely as well as helping you.

Good Luck.

T

Dear Mr XXXX,

Please accept my application for an internship (or contract) as; ***, with your company.

I have four years of experience in the Pharmaceutica
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Mr. Director,


Please accept my spontaneous application as; Mechanical engineer, with your company.


I have six years of experience in the commercial industry and I am now considering a new step in my career with the objective to improve my professional and personal skills


Currently I am in DUBAI and I am looking for a new opportunity.

I was in charge of a

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