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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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how can you revise this sentence?
From the capital city, Peshawar, he could see bands of armed Afghan refugees, called the Taliban, who had been flooding back into Afghanistan to seize power from the tottering remnants of the former Soviet puppet government.
From the capital city, Peshawar, he could see bands of armed Afghan refugees, called the Taliban, who had been flooding back into Afghanistan to seize power from the tottering remnants of the former Soviet puppet government.
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Anonymous how can you revise this sentence? From the capital city, Peshawar, he could see bands of armed Afghan refugees, called the Taliban, who had been flooding back into Afghanistan to seize power from the tottering remnants of the former Soviet puppet government. I don't think there is anything about that sentence I would change.
- Anonymous how can you revise this sentence?
- From the capital city, Peshawar, he could see bands of armed Afghan refugees, called the Taliban, who had been flooding back into Afghanistan to seize power from the tottering remnants of the former Soviet puppet government.
- I don't think there is anything about that sentence I would change.
- To the contrary, I consider this sentence a fine example of descriptive prose.
- It appears professional.
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Anonymoushow can you revise this sentence?I don't think there is anything about that sentence I would change. To the c
From the capital city, Peshawar, he could see bands of armed Afghan refugees, called the Taliban, who had been flooding back into Afghanistan to seize power from the tottering remnants of the former Soviet puppet government.
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