Hi there, I currently making my way through a pile of proofreading and have come across a list that has me a little stumped. It reads as follows:
'... there will be retail outlets, restaurants, medical and leisure facilities.'
My question is whether this sentence is fine as it is, should be re-written for clarity or could do with another 'and' adding before medical (however, that feels a little clumsy to me).
I ask because it reads to me as though you have 'medical' something and then 'leisure facilities. I could be reading too much into this but I'd appreciate any help people have on this.
Many thanks,
Celeryshed.
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