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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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listener/audience
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
My friend, Lily, is special to me. She often talks to me and encourages me when I feel sad. One time, she saw me on my seat and felt like very sad, so she came to my side and asked what had happened to me. I was deeply touched then. She is a shy girl. She usually covers her mood and seldom talks about her feeling with others. I am one of the few people who she can talk to, so I want to be her listener/audience!
My friend, Lily, is special to me. She often talks to me and encourages me when I feel sad. One time, she saw me on my seat and felt like very sad, so she came to my side and asked what had happened to me. I was deeply touched then. She is a shy girl. She usually covers her mood and seldom talks about her feeling with others. I am one of the few people who she can talk to, so I want to be her listener/audience!
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Hi I like that. Maybe: - One time, she saw me on my seat when I was feeling sad ... - She usually hides her mood - ...
- Hi I like that.
- Maybe: - One time, she saw me on my seat when I was feeling sad ...
- - She usually hides her mood - ...
- talks about her feelings ...
- Either of the last two words is good - difficult to choose.
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Hi
I like that. Maybe:
- One time, she saw me on my seat when I was feeling sad ...
- She usually hides her mood
- ... talks about her feelings ...
Either of the last two words is good - difficult to choose. I quite like 'audience'
Dave
I like that. Maybe:
- One time, she saw me on my seat when I was feeling sad ...
- She usually hides her mood
- ... talks about her feelings ...
Either of the last two words is good - difficult to choose. I quite like 'audience'
Dave
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