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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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I visited Fort San Domingo during this summer vacation. It’s a very special building because it is an elegant Victorian house fused with some Chinese elements. Most importantly, it’s one of the oldest buildings in Taipei and a grade one listed historical site. In the interior, it is decorated with gorgeous furniture and designed with western style. Outside of the building, there stands the wall witnessing the history of Fort San Domingo. Also, this location provides a beautiful outlook on Guanyin Mountain and the Tamsui River. I enjoyed myself so much as to linger on without any thought of leaving. I want to visit there again.
I visited Fort San Domingo during this summer vacation. It’s a very special building because it is an elegant Victorian house fused with some Chinese elements. Most importantly, it’s one of the oldest buildings in Taipei and a grade one listed historical site. In the interior, it is decorated with gorgeous furniture and designed with western style. Outside of the building, there stands the wall witnessing the history of Fort San Domingo. Also, this location provides a beautiful outlook on Guanyin Mountain and the Tamsui River. I enjoyed myself so much as to linger on without any thought of leaving. I want to visit there again.
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Outside of the building - outside is a preposition that needs to extra 'help'. I'm one who doesn't like to begin a sentence with 'also' - This location also provides...
- Outside of the building - outside is a preposition that needs to extra 'help'.
- I'm one who doesn't like to begin a sentence with 'also' - This location also provides...
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Outside of the building - outside is a preposition that needs to extra 'help'.
I'm one who doesn't like to begin a sentence with 'also' - This location also provides...
I'm one who doesn't like to begin a sentence with 'also' - This location also provides...
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