Lines for a dating apps
Hi,
Could you guys correct my phrasing? This is for a dating app.
Does this sound good:
"I like the simple and fun chemistry you can make with new people", please help me rephrase this sentence.
Also:
"I like a girl who can talk about traveling for hours, and isn't afraid to drink adventurously", I hope it doesn't sound weird.
Thanks.
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Tal262 and isn't afraid to drink adventurously The subject of this entire sentence is "I", so it should be "am not afraid" instead of "isn't afraid"
- Tal262 and isn't afraid to drink adventurously The subject of this entire sentence is "I", so it should be "am not afraid" instead of "isn't afraid"
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Tal262and isn't afraid to drink adventurously
The subject of this entire sentence is "I", so it should be "am not afraid" instead of "isn't afraid"
0Tal262"I like the simple and fun chemistry you can make with new people"
Largely this is fine. The only slight quibble I have is that I perceive "chemistry" between people to be quite a complicated matter, so it's a bit unexpected to have it called "simple".
Tal262"I like a girl who can talk about traveling for hours, and isn't a
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