Line Graph- Ielts exam

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The graph show average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

"The line graph illustrates US consumers' average yearly expenses on mobile phone and landline phone services from 2001 to 2010.

Overall, the expenditures on landline phone services declined gradually over the period, whereas spending on mobile phone rose noticeably.

In 2001, Americans spent an average of nearly $700 on residential phone services. This was far higher than cell phone services, costing only around $200. Over the following five years, average yearly spending on landlines fell by nearly $200, while expenses on mobiles rose by approximately $300.

In the year 2006, it was noticeable that US consumers cost the same amount of money on both types of phone service, at about $550 on average. By 2010, expenditure on mobile phones was the largest, around $750. By contrast, the figure for spending on landline phone had decreased to just over half this amount."

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Hello, this is my writing for task 1 Ielts exam. Please check my mistake. (Only one?) Thanks !

The (missing word) graph show average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

"The line graph illustrates US consumers' average yearly expenses on mobile phone and landline phone services from 2001 to 2010.

Overall, the expenditures on landline phone services declined gradually over the period, whereas spending on mobile phone services rose noticeably.

In 2001, Americans spent an average of nearly $700 on residential phone services. This was far higher than cell phone services, costing only around $200. Over the following five years, average yearly spending on landlines fell by nearly $200, while expenses on mobiles rose by approximately $300.

In the year 2006, it was noticeable that US consumers cost the same amount of money on both types of phone service, at about $550 on average. By 2010, expenditure on mobile phones was the largest, around $750. By contrast, the figure for spending on landline phone were ~~had decreased to~~ just over half this amount."

Bonus observation:

The decrease in landline phone expenditures was nearly linear during the period, at a rate of about $30 per year. In contrast, the increase in mobile phone expenditures also was nearly linear, at a rate of $66 per year, more than twice the rate of decrease in landline expenditures.

Line Graph- Ielts exam

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