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Namsteven Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Like sisters and brothers

- When my friends and I were walking along the beach, we saw a couple kissing each other in a romantic scenery. After that we bought some foods and drinks and threw a party in our room of the hotel. We talked and laughed very happily like brothers and sisters in a family.

- Are these sentences grammatical?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

Namsteven
  

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No. When my friends and I were walking along the beach, we saw a romantic scene of a couple kissing . After that , we bought some food and drinks and threw a party in our hotel room .

  • No.
  • When my friends and I were walking along the beach, we saw a romantic scene of a couple kissing .
  • After that , we bought some food and drinks and threw a party in our hotel room .
  • We talked and laughed very happily like brothers and sisters.
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No.

When my friends and I were walking along the beach, we saw a romantic scene of a couple kissing. After that, we bought some food and drinks and threw a party in our hotel room. We talked and laughed very happily like brothers and sisters.
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Hi,

- When my friends and I were walking along the beach, we saw a couple kissing each other in a romantic scenery. After that we bought some foods and drinks and threw a party in our room of the hotel. We talked and laughed very happily like brothers and sisters in a family.

- Are these sentences grammatical? Yes, they are. But a native speaker would never say this.

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