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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
Lighting system
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Request timer /schedule control of lighting system at club house
Dear Developer
Further to our previous discussion with you regarding no timer / schedule control for lighting system of club house, timer/ schedule control shall be provided to lighting system of club house. We would like to seek your assistance in enhancing the existing lighting system so as to save energy consumption and manpower.
Request timer /schedule control of lighting system at club house
Dear Developer
Further to our previous discussion with you regarding no timer / schedule control for lighting system of club house, timer/ schedule control shall be provided to lighting system of club house. We would like to seek your assistance in enhancing the existing lighting system so as to save energy consumption and manpower.
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Here are my suggested corrections: Timer/schedule control of lighting system at club house Dear Developer Further to our previous discussion with you regarding the lack of a timer/schedule control on the lighting system at our club house, we would like confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system. We are keen to have your assistance in enhancing the existing lighting system so as to save energy consumption and manpower.
- Here are my suggested corrections: Timer/schedule control of lighting system at club house Dear Developer Further to our previous discussion with you regarding the lack of a timer/schedule control on the lighting system at our club house, we would like confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system.
- We are keen to have your assistance in enhancing the existing lighting system so as to save energy consumption and manpower.
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Here are my suggested corrections:
Timer/schedule control of lighting system at club house
Dear Developer
Further to our previous discussion with you regarding the lack of a timer/schedule control on the lighting system at our club house, we would like confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system. We are keen t
Timer/schedule control of lighting system at club house
Dear Developer
Further to our previous discussion with you regarding the lack of a timer/schedule control on the lighting system at our club house, we would like confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system. We are keen t
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I have a question of the following sentance.
we would like confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system.
we want to have a confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system.
Is it same meani
I have a question of the following sentance.
we would like confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system.
we want to have a confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system.
Is it same meani
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we want to have confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system.
You can say 'want [to have] confirmation'; but would like [to have] or maybe need [to have] is more polite
You can say 'want [to have] confirmation'; but would like [to have] or maybe need [to have] is more polite
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