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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Lighting modification

I would be grateful if you can help me to correct the following e-mail.

As all lighting operation for water feature are designed in connection with landscape lighting. To facilitate further operation, we would like to request a modification from single control circuit to two individual control circuits. Therefore, we would be grateful if you can assist us to solve the problem.
  

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The lighting operation for the water feature has been designed to work in conjuntion with the landscape lighting. We would like to request a modification from a single control circuit to two individual control circuits. We would be grateful if you could assist with this.

  • The lighting operation for the water feature has been designed to work in conjuntion with the landscape lighting.
  • We would like to request a modification from a single control circuit to two individual control circuits.
  • We would be grateful if you could assist with this.
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The lighting operation for the water feature has been designed to work in conjuntion with the landscape lighting. We would like to request a modification from a single control circuit to two individual control circuits. We would be grateful if you could assist with this.
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Hi Ben

I would write:

As all lighting operations for water features are designed in connection with the landscape, we would like to request a modification from a single control circuit to two individual control circuits to facilitate further operations. Therefore we would be grateful for your assistance in solving this problem.

Hope this will be of use to you.

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