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Eulid Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary

lighting deaths

Which of the following sentences is correct?

1. Number of lighting deaths under a tree.
2. Number of lighting deaths that occurred when the victim was under a tree.

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I presume you are writing the title to a chart or similar, because they are not complete sentences. If I am right, you could write : "Number of deaths from lightning strikes to trees". My title may be too general, if you are dealing with victims who were actually under a tree at the time (not beside or near etc).

  • I presume you are writing the title to a chart or similar, because they are not complete sentences.
  • If I am right, you could write : "Number of deaths from lightning strikes to trees".
  • My title may be too general, if you are dealing with victims who were actually under a tree at the time (not beside or near etc).
  • In this case, it has to be longer, such as : "Number of people killed by lightning while under trees" Your number 2.
  • would be OK if you said "lightning-related".
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I presume you are writing the title to a chart or similar, because they are not complete sentences. If I am right, you could write :

"Number of deaths from lightning strikes to trees".

My title may be too general, if you are dealing with victims who were actually under a tree at the time (not beside or near etc). In this case, it has to be longer, such as :

"Number of

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