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PreciousJones Posted 14 years ago
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Life

I've known Janet since high school. I remember the good old days when we would cruise around, and drive from Rowland Heights, make a potty stop in Alhambra for Janet, then continue on to Temple City and sometimes weave our way to Pasadena. I miss that carefree and nothing to worry about lifestyle, but somehow memories of them make it even sweeter. I am honored to be your maid of honor and I must say that you've done good for yourself.

What a wonderful and harmonious occasion we have here. A beautiful bride and her prince charming. I can’t say how happy I am for the both of you. It may be a cliché, but sometimes a match made in heaven does happen on earth and that’s what we’re all gathered here for… To Janet and Devo, let’s all wish them a happy and loving marriage for all eternity.

Please proofread and make it better. Thank you.
  

Top answer

Hi, make a potty stop Not a very suitable thing to mention on a special occasion. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, make a potty stop Not a very suitable thing to mention on a special occasion.
  • Clive
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Hi,

make a potty stop Not a very suitable thing to mention on a special occasion.

Clive
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CliveHi,make a potty stop Not a very suitable thing to mention on a special occasion.Clive
I'm trying to get a laugh...lol.

What about the everything else?
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PreciousJonesI've known Janet since high school. I remember the good old days when we would cruise around, and drive from Rowland Heights, make a potty stop in Alhambra for Janet, then continue on to Temple City and sometimes weave our way to Pasadena. I miss that carefree and nothing to worry about lifestyle, but somehow memories of them make it even sweeter. I am honored
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