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"In this world where no one care for anyone I feel blessed and proud that I could make 2 best friends as my treasure. Till date in my life, I am extremely happy to have the least only two but the best of them where no worldy things comes in between us. The rest are the acquaintances who are never hard to see as most of them are in the same city but they don't have that thing in them that which I find in my two best friends. My two best friends live nearly miles away from me we dont see each other in person but we remain always updated of each and every moments through phones or emails. "

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an attempted 2nd draft............... In this world where no one seems to care for anyone, I feel blessed and proud to have two treasured best friends. At this time in my life I am extremely happy to have at least two friends where no worldly things can come between us.

  • an attempted 2nd draft...............
  • In this world where no one seems to care for anyone, I feel blessed and proud to have two treasured best friends.
  • At this time in my life I am extremely happy to have at least two friends where no worldly things can come between us.
  • The rest of my friends are just acquaintances.
  • They are never hard to see as most of them live in the same city where I am but they don't have the same special qualities that I find in my two best friends.
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an attempted 2nd draft...............

In this world where no one seems to care for anyone, I feel blessed and proud to have two treasured best friends. At this time in my life I am extremely happy to have at least two friends where no worldly things can come between us. The rest of my friends are just acquaintances. They are never hard to see as most of them live in the same city

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